Wednesday, October 11, 2006

in the middle of the story

(…) So he decided to go to the bar around the corner to try to find someone to talk to. There, there were a lot of people who were watching a football match. So he decided to stay there until the end of the march. After one hour he started to feel tired, so he went back home. But when he was in his garden he saw a light in his living room; so he was scared and he caught his baseball bat. Suddenly he heard some voices from behind the door. John opened it screaming and with the bat in his hands; but he fell over the carpet and his face crashed on a cake… a cake??? “SURPRISEEEE!!!” He left his head and he saw a lot of people who were laughing, a lot of balloons around the room and a poster with the writing “HAPPY BIRTHDAY”. It was a party for him!!! They spent a fantastic night dancing singing and laughing for the John's falling and they enjoy themselves (…)

Maddalena Giacopuzzi
Irene Pirelli
Francesca Carpanese
Giulia Bazzerla

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

i read your story ands i think it isn't so original...mine's better!!
Ambra

Friday, 13 October, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi maddy and company...we are vale s., fede and ceci...we think this story is very nice!!! and the color of the writing is original!!!

Friday, 13 October, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ehi Maddy and co.!!!!!!!!!
your idea to coloured the text is fantastic!!!!and the story is beautiful!!!compliments...
Vale & Cla

Friday, 13 October, 2006  

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